Explosive_Pen

Twin!!! You got featured again?!?!?! Unfair, but congrats!!! :D This was reallllly good!! jumelle

Also, I don't know how you guys changed things around, but I liked what you originally showed me better. Actually, so do I, but that's probably just because I wrote ...

Twin ~ I need the italics because I want emphasis on the you. Which, of course, is the whole purpose for italicizing it. And only one gold star? Nuh-uh. *Steals ...

Hey all future readers: I gotta fix some of the first chapter no-nos, so once I do, I'll post it up. I wrote that about a year ago and I ...

Love ya Twin! I'll definitely work on this, when I'm feeling less lazy.

Actually Em, I didn't even notice. Want me to pick a different letter, or do you not care?

Aww, no reviews? It must be so horrible that it scared everyone away.

Emily ~ Look up mother in the search thing on the side, and one of the results is Abra. Literally, it means mother of nations, but it's essentially the same ...

Hm, I see. Then how about Clayton? I've always loved that name.

Try I get all my characters' names from there. Click on "Search baby names" and type in a meaning. It's great.

Thanks Rosey. I'll work on it.

Haha, this is so clever! Yes, Google's fantatstic! Love your sense of rhythm. It's so consistent, and the rhyme scheme is genius. I know this isn't much of a review, ...

Lmao. Amazing. Genius. Fantastic.

Em ~ 'Tis so dark because, well, that is writing. Try having words claw their ways through your veins and down to your fingertips. It hurts. And I was being ...

Thanks for the advice! I'll work on it.