Explosive_Pen

Hi there! I'm terribly out of practice with reviewing, but hopefully I can help at least a little bit. So I really liked your central metaphor here. A crossword puzzle ...

Hi there! I haven't been around in a really long time and it's been about a year since I've last done a review. Let's see if I still remember how ...

Kamas!

Hey there! So when I saw that you're only twelve years old, I was really impressed. This is a really good poem to be writing at that age, but you ...

Hi there, Ed. I haven't seen you in a while. I liked this. It's always refreshing to see simplicity in poetry, while most poets use long words and complicated sentences. ...

Hi there. So unlike most of your other reviewers so far, I don't think I've ever read any of your poetry. I'm regretting that now; I thought that this was ...

Hi there. So I like concept of this, and your images are fantastic. However, I felt that the poem read like a long, run-on sentence. But that's easy to fix. ...

Mars! Long time no see! So I really like this. Like really, really. This poem is so eloquent and it flows nicely and the imagerly is excellent and your diction ...

Hi there. So the concept of this was good, but the execution was a bit lacking. First of all, please add in some punctuation. Without it, this seems a bit ...

Hi there! I haven't reviewed prose in so long, so forgive me if I seem a bit scatterbrained. Also, I haven't read the reviews before mine, so forgive me if ...

Hi there! I have to admit, I always get a bit excited when I look at the frontpage of YWS and see a new poem from you, and this certainly ...

Lileh! Of course I always love your work, obviously. ;) I liked this. It was so sweet and surprisingly apt with what I'm feeling at the moment. This flowed nicely ...

Hello. I liked this. I think you've got some great images. There's a place under my eyelids where strangers like to drive their cars. While this presented an interesting image, ...

Hi there! I love Snow Patrol. =] I'm sorry, but while this is still a good poem, it's not the best that I've seen from you. I love your work ...

This is beautiful, but then again, I've always enjoyed your work. Because of that, I've always been too intimidated to offer a proper critique, but I'll do my best. A ...