ExOmelas

I mean, obviously this was help but you know what I mean. Skype chat, talk-it-through sort of help.

Hrm... can you give me some help with it later?

Thanks for the review! :D The next chapter will follow as soon as I decide on a plot line. There are about four or five floating around right now :P

Look, I know what acrostics are. I did not actually read the description since you sent me a link directly to the work. When a poem gets published, there is ...

Well, you'd have to mention Dajana in the poem. Had it been a traditional name like 'Alice' or something, I would have put it together, but this is not obvious ...

e All I'm saying is that you showing me in a comment like this what I've missed doesn't help because you can't do that for an ordinary reader. You need ...

"I might add a bit about Caius' worry for her about what she is doing but he still sees her as his Progeny - someone who is loyal to the ...

I have a problem with "they". It creates ambiguity between singular and plural. We already have that ambiguity in the second person and it drives me nuts. I don't even ...

Hurray for acceptance :D

My transgender friend Axel just came back to school after his f2m top-half operation! His voice is so low and he has stubble :D

You're welcome :) btw, I've reviewed works with farrrr more spelling errors. Honestly, I've reviewed some where I had 1000 characters by the end of the grammar check ;)

I'm not a poet so I'll just leave a comment. Perfect execution. Perfect description of a perfect-because-he's-imperfect-like-the-rest-of-us person. My favourite is anger turning into emotion because i

Thanks so much! And happy review day :D

Haha! You're welcome :)

I just have to quickly mention that the verse that begins 'And you'll have to excuse my typos' for some reason sounded like rap in my head. None of the ...