ExOmelas

I'm glad they're getting more depth to them. There's quite a lot of them and there was so much going on that it was hard to get right down to ...

Yeah actually that's probably not happening. I highly recommend splitting this into parts.

Thanks for the review! :D I'm in the middle of exam season at the moment so I'm having to pause editing a bit. I'll come back to this on May ...

Haha no worries xD Yeah, a Terry Pratchett type audience would probably suit me quite well. I'm not sure it's *quite* silly enough to be extremely similar writing, but I ...

Yeah I can see why you'd think older. I don't think I enjoy writing for such a young target audience, but like, it's monkeys on a spaceship... how old could ...

So just "Fur Feathers Scales and Stars"? I'm really not sure who my target audience is at the moment. I was meant to be 8-12 but I'm not sure...

Oh by the way, what do you think of the title? This is the third one I've gone through - previously Monkey Boy's Adventures in Space when it was basically ...

1. Alright, that's fine, I'll put something in. Will have a think about how to do it subtly. Hm... If I do that I have to explain at some point ...

Cool, thanks. Also I realise I've not actually been making any of your suggested changes yet - will happen after exams XD

1. I'm actually not sure I understand what you're saying here. He asks himself why he's scared of Ochon. Am I obligated to answer that? 2. Ah I see what ...

Hrm... The explanation does come in quite gradually, but I'd say it doesn't start until part 3. Maybe I could put something in when Gerry McCaw tells Margo they have ...

1. I'll go with the first choice - ie making it clearer why this is lucky. (It's because he doesn't want people asking him questions about what's going on). 2. ...

Temperature: I'm keeping this in mind but haven't had time to edit it in yet, so just to let you know it won't be there in the next couple of ...

I'll leave this as it is at the moment and try to come up with some solutions. Grr at logistics :P

Woah, I wonder what happened with the spaces here haha! I'll go fix that lot now XD