ExOmelas

The bit about the duck-walking and hopping: whoops, that's what I get for writing a chapter of a story two months after the previous one xD (august and october of ...

@SarukaTheHuman ooh link? @KaraStevens haha yeah I know it's a real person, you said so. I just mean that those things were things you did well and could improve to ...

Thanks for the review, Drac :D

I reviewed Muse before this one ^.^

I'm glad you like Steve :) He's actually the character that made me go back and change some of the earlier chapters, which had been basically satire. I know sometimes ...

But also technology makes that easier. Like, microscopes make us better easier to understand stuff. And watching films makes us feel things from (fictional) lives other than our own - ...

I have nowhere near the background knowledge to argue this. All I can recommend is making it clearer why what you say helps your argument. Also, life can be perfectly ...

That's fair enough. I'll write a version where it's the polar bear and see how it goes :)

Oh wow! Congrats :D

Thanks for the review - glad you enjoyed :)

Also I think it's only one more review til I go back to reviewing yours. I'll give you the points we agreed after that one as well :)

Awesome, glad it worked for you :)

Animals' communication pre-speech - Interesting. Obviously that is not my intention (in fact it's the very thing I'm trying to go against) so maybe I'll make it clear that I ...

Hm...maybe I could make it a bit clearer that Louis is barely forcing those words out. Thanks for the review :)

Hm... Good to know. I'll have a read over and see what I can do about flow. Thanks :)