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Also we have a blog section that might be a better place for something like this.

Ahhhh fair enough :P That actually is an excuse though - theraputic writing is a very useful thing :) Hope whatever you're venting about turns out ok

First of all, apologies for the chapter length. It was an awkward split I'm afraid :/ (I think the chapter was about 2500 or so overall) Hm... that's weird about ...

Awesome :) Thank you!! :D

Yeah that would definitely make sense for how she talks

It's kind of sad that that's a thing stories have to worry about. Like, it's gay because it would make no sense for it to be straight (I'm not saying ...

There is drama in the next scene but not exactly an antagonist. I think the antagonism starts in chapter 9 or so but I can't remember off the top of ...

dry humour = best humour :P I'll let you know if I think it's getting better :) My current story is but I'm honestly only reading this cos I'm enjoying ...

Ohhh ok, fair enough. Just particularly useful bits of information about the characters. As in, the suggestions I made in the character section. I realised that one of the reasons ...

Ohhh ok, I see

Oooh... I feel like there will be some sort of fight in which Logan can't really control herself, then Logan and Julia run off somewhere to try and figure this ...

Thanks for your review! I'll see what I can do about those points you brought up :)

Hm... this is interesting. Will think about this for future drafts. Haha, no worries xD

Ahhh I'd forgotten about that! That makes sense :)

You were not kidding about the harshness xD You actually reviewed the first chapter of my camp NaNo a couple of years ago (though that time I actually started the ...