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Yay, that's exactly what I was hoping for! :D

Yay, I'm glad the joke worked ^.^ Yeah, the questioning didn't feel right... I think what I really want is like a picture of a piece of parchment with Buck's ...

Oooops I completely forgot that Victane and Buck were meant to do morning shenanigans. This was a very rushed segment worked around Christmas xD This will definitely be a chapter ...

yay, okay that's great to know! and yes, i have many plans for the next chapter part... bwahahaha :D

Yay, I'm glad you liked it! I'm pretty sure this is going to be a way of having fun while writing their journey to the prince's court, while also keeping ...

No worries, will deal with this with mod powers :)

hmmm... well I do have the rest of the week to plan, so I'll see if I come up with anything I'm actively excited to write ^.^ oh heck this ...

oooooops i should have made this clearer... his Mum moved back north when his dad was taken, as in to the region where Buck is headed. The commute from his ...

Yeah that makes sense about Misene. I'm sure I can add in more of this kind of thing in the tavern scene and the poet sign-in before the banquet :) ...

*next chapter part

Hi Jabber, I'm glad you liked it :) It's a shame Misene's personality still isn't shining through... I'm unsure how to characterise people as like "quiet and kind" when their ...

The age thing: maybe some sense of what the punishment would be. My natural expectation is like getting grounded or something, which might be where the age thing is coming ...

alternative maybe Misene thought Buck would have known because it was such a wildly gossiped about thing, or thought Pires would have told him, but Buck was so busy getting ...

hmmm yeah I probably shouldn't have given that line to Misene. It was sort of a flow thing - moving from one friend talking to the other. But it would ...

teeheehee this is exactly the reaction I was hoping for! there's a couple of questions still left at the end of 4.3 but it's hopefully quite a clear set-up that ...