ExOmelas

Hiya, thanks for the review! Just out of interest, what kind of thing would have drawn you in more? The hook here is meant to be the meeting with the ...

No worries

Also yee sorry I was just terrified for a second that you related to his disapproval for two men dancing xD

Oh heck I may have really messed up. That was meant to be clear from Buck and Dorrea%u2019s conversation. If it%u2019s not clear by then then I%u2019m in trouble xD

Hmm... was it not clear that Raddig's reaction to Buck asking to dance with him was "what no i'm not gay" except not actually saying it? It wasn't exactly meant ...

ahaha this is such a strange point to enter this story at xD the chapter before had the biggest reveal in the entire story, like the moment it was all ...

yeah that might be it

ah yeah, I figure it would be unreasonable for Buck to have to leave immediately, even if he's definitely banished. Like, I think most monarchs would let him at least ...

I have no idea what I was meaning with the "many of flowing" xD the "of" was maybe meant to be a noun? idk haha it was a couple months ...

gdi well it was in the green room last time i looked :P

I'm slightly confused by what's confusing you - he includes a description of the country's wonders in order to add reason for Erson to come live here and marry Pires. ...

I'm slightly confused by what's confusing you - he includes a description of the country's wonders in order to add reason for Erson to come live here and marry Pires. ...

oh, one other thing. I'm not sure it's believable for someone to come out with the words "kentucky summer sunrise" but I started to get the feeling that Rhys had ...

hi hi sorry I'm late, I read this a while ago on my phone but was busy so couldn't say thanks - so thank you :D I did actually mean ...

aww thanks for the review Vent ^.^ I think various plot events mean that Pires had to reveal now, but maybe I could have Buck mention that he'd seen most ...