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Re: Past Hope chp. 6
Hiya, you join me on my quest to conquer the Oldest tab of the green room! Nit-picks and nice moments: They weren’t drowned out, but rather what drowned out my ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: CHANGES OF HEART PART 5
Well this is terrifying. Hi there, I'm here to save your work from the lonely Oldest tab of the green room! So, there's a whoooole lot happens here that I ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (20.1)
Hello again on this voyage through the Oldest tab! Nit-picks and nice moments: Everyone was stiff and Isha was doing her best to absently keep herself between Shiloh you can't ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Sognore 3.0
Hey there, happy review day! Nit-picks: She yawned, revealing a single pointed fang. I'm confused why he seems so fixated on the eye but the fang is only noted once. ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Esperanto Translation - La Bildo de Dorian Grey, Oscar Wilde
So, this is going to be a difficult thing to review. I'd leave it for someone who knows the language, but given this has been in the Green Room so ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (19.2)
Ah, that time honoured tradition of reviewing a 19th chapter on Review Day to get it out the green room. I apologise in advance for anything I say that doesn't ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: The brain bug.
Heya, thought I'd pop by before bed. I'm not usually one for poetry, but I'm trying to practice more, so here we go! This is an extremely relatable subject, which ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: The Accidental Ghosts 1.1
Hey, let's get started on review day! Nit-picks and nice moments: The idea that they could move without horses intrigued her, and made her think of magic and other fascinating ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 2.3
Hey, decided to take a break from Doctor Who and come review this! Nit-picks and nice moments: Ethan pulled out of the parking lot as Rhys walked towards the church ...
Apr 24, 2019 -
Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 2.2
Hey, not quite ready to get into writing headspace after studying, so easing myself in with a review here. Nit-picks and nice moments: He sighed loudly as he drug himself ...
Apr 20, 2019 -
Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 2.1
Hey, thought I might as well review this one too since it's so short. Nit-picks and nice moments: "Si," he replied, making her laugh. She always laughed at how terrible ...
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 1.2
Heyo, let's see if we can't rescue this chapterfriend from the green room. Nit-picks and nice moments: Rhys exited the house twenty minutes later, wiping spit and semen from the ...
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 1.1
Hey, you know what I haven't done in absolutely ages - a review. You know what I haven't read in absolutely ages - this story. Nit-picks: pulling his hood up ...
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: My Word For Conspiracy’s A Theory
Hey Eagle, decided I might as well review this before I get into working on my own poem in the other pad. There is something I'm confused about here. This ...
Feb 9, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 8.2
Hey Shan, I keep feeling like I'm not being productive because I'm studying instead of reviewing so I'm going to catch up with week 11 of LMS xD Nit-picks and ...
Sep 23, 2018