ExOmelas

Just the one nit-pick: Jason cringed at this and wanted very much so to list off every inhabitable planet he knew, but he held his tongue. This is a sudden ...

Nit-picks: Avery drove on and on until he began to run out of gas. If he's going to the Thames, he probably calls it petrol ;) The old woman turned ...

Hey, I come here on the recommendation of Kaos and Lareine, who suggested this when I asked in chat for a whole chunk of novel I could read for review ...

Hey, I've been mostly writing reviews for novel chapters lately so my structure for reviewing is geared towards that. Warning in advance that this is going to be a slightly ...

Heyo, Nit-picks first: Finally the shouting pulled me out of these day dreams. I'm not sure why, but "these" doesn't quite fit for me. I'd say "my". “The only way ...

Okay, the first thing I notice before I even start reading this is the massive blocks of text. Not only does this mean arguments are difficult to understand because the ...

Hey again, Nit-picks: But Danara was feeling practically the exact opposite. You probably don't need "practically". I know that it's not literally exactly because that's impossible to measure so there

Hey there! Nit-picks first: take that phrase out of her memories I'm not totally sure what phrase you actually mean. It's the same sentiment over and over again, other people ...

Nit-picks: Our job’s are on the line as it is. No apostrophe Not really, no. The lightsaber wound is still burning in my thigh. If Meetra weren’t present, Darth Traya ...

Hey there! So this is my fifth review of review day and I just finished reviewing the uploaded chapters of a novel, so I was looking for something to replace ...

RD4 Nit-picks: his hangover was definitely going to impair him for awhile "a while" He raised up Not quite sure about this. I think it would be either "He rose" ...

RD3 Nit-picks: barely noticing the loud noises he was making I'm not sure if this is a personal thing but somebody else has said it to me before so I ...

RD Review #2 Nit-picks: gray ash he's come to be accustom to. This is a bit of messy phrasing. First of all the "he's" is a slip into present tense. ...

Yo, here begins my review day. Nit-picks: "Baby come here!"Sofie's sweet voice rang out. Missed the space. Uh, I'm coming , Sof. swiping down on a chat had typo God ...

Yo, I was going to leave these til review day but meh I'm bored :P Nit-picks: swiping the chat head that was had popped up. His leg; however, wouldn't stop ...