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Hey, here as requested :) Nit-picks and nice moments: “I know,” Leo replied Hehe, "Leo" “Seriously? Why can’t I get to beat anyone up?” he moaned. Literally giggled out loud. ...

Hey there, I'm not really sure why this is in bold, but since that doesn't come through when you copy/paste for quotes, I'm just not going to mention that. Nit-picks: ...

Hey Storm, Nit-picks and nice moments: gazing at the outfits that clothed mannequins that were out on the floor. That didn't quite flow right. I think it's the two 'that's ...

Hey there, welcome to my 100th review of the month! *celebrates* My first thing I thought when I saw this is that I'd like more variation near the beginning. "I ...

Hey there, The first thing I noticed here is that your author's note answered a question I was having towards the end of the poem. Ie - oh dear, this ...

Hey, welcome to my final stretch to 100 reviews this month :P Nit-picks and nice moments: The Conics was a dream—a good dream, not a nightmare like its namesake. Ellipse ...

Hi again! Just the one nit-pick this time: like li v f e saving medicine. Overall, you have something solid here. You have a clear aim, to show the many ...

Hey there! First of all, welcome to Young Writers Society! I hope you find the sort of critiquing you need here :) I'm just going to go through this line ...

Heyyy Dragon! Nit-picks and nice moments: I wasn’t in a rush to get(?) anywhere (Believe me, I tried it before. And don’t judge me based on what I do in ...

Hey there, welcome to my last review of the night in a desperate attempt to cling onto my spot at the top of the day's leaderboard :P As a prose ...

Hey there, Werthan. You get the honour of being the last review I do today in an attempt to reclaim my spot at the top of the day's leaderboard :P ...

Hey there, you get the joy of being the green room review I do to try and reclaim my spot at the top of the day's leaderboard :P First things ...

Hey there, here's a review from the Knights of the Green Room After Watch :) (Oh, my quotes won't be in italics because it's extra bbcode and it's not like ...

Oops, forgot to do this yesterday. Here we go again :) Nit-picks and nice moments (I just do them by instinct) : but only after waiting around for four minutes ...

Right, that's dinner finished. Time to review! Nit-picks and nice moments: the moon, round and full like a silver coin caught mid-flip in the sky. I think this should be ...