ExOmelas

Hey Lauren, stop 6 on my tour of LMS week 3! Nit-picks: She tugged on her reins, pulling Esther back from where she had been about to step in an ...

Hey, I wasn't going to review today in case of burnout but I am currently very bored and would like something to do xD Nit-picks: an individual is only allowed ...

Okay, going to review this (my fourth of week 3) then go back to writing. Burnout is not coming for me! Nit-picks: Wong stepped through into another dimension, and stole ...

Hey Shan, you're stop 3 on my attempt to catch up with LMS week 3 xD Nit-picks: The doubt was the police would stop the two before they left and ...

Heyo, I realise I'm quite behind on LMS chapters but I think that's just going to be the way it is if I don't want to burnout or drop novels ...

Okay, right, time to actually get myself off my butt and review. Nit-picks: She held it up for a moment, eyes tracing the lacy bodice, feeling two inches outside of ...

Welp, apparently nobody is online right now so I might as well review this too :P Nit-picks: Mother Superior had the car up and running again in five minutes flat. ...

Hey Raye, I keep putting this off because the chapter's quite long but it's not like I have anything to do today anyway xD Nit-picks and a nice moment: Her ...

Hey, unsure whether this is actually within an hour but I think it's probably the fastest I've ever got here :P Nit-picks: She choked on her next breath in, sputtering ...

Oh cool this is still in the GR. I thought my burnout would have meant I left it too late. Nit-picks: 1. Assorted typos 2. His observations told him that ...

Hey there, I've been dealing with a bit of review burnout recently but I'm going to try and at least complete this one by the end of the day. Nit-picks: ...

Hey Shey, day 2 of my attempts to review chapter 2s of the LMSs I am following! Nit-picks: “You’re really transparent when something annoys you. I figured your attacks repeatedly ...

Hey, and with this I am now two thirds of the way through the LMS chapter 2 quest! Nit-picks: A soft melody began to leave the car's stereo. This is ...

Heyo, you're the fifth stop on my LMS-chapter-2 express! Nitpicks: “Earlier, me and Big Slick decided code names. I’m Tanky, she’s Slick Slick. You’re ‘The Fruit,’” These don't seem like

Hey, you're 4th up on my great LMS-Chapter-2-adventure-quest! Nit-picks, nice moments and a couple of questions: Dante rubbed his eyes under his glasses. “She said nobody would have you. I ...