Evi

Hola Pozoe! ^^ “Are you ready? Rachel and Kess are probably hiring private detectives already to come and find us. We should really find them before they blow too much ...

Hola Pozoe! ^^ Evi here. At the moment, I'm writing a critique on both sections at the same time, so that's to blame for the inevitable confusion that is to ...

Yo-la, Evi here. ^^ Jetpack pretty much had the exact right idea about what needs to be fixed, so I'll just echo some things, nit-pick a bit, and make some ...

Hey Durriedog. ^^ Evi here. First of all. The 2:1 ratio, which Empress almost brought up, is the major rule of YWS. That means that, for every one piece you ...

Hey Jojo, I liked this. ^^ I think it might move a bit slowly for a prologue, maybe just a teensy bit over-described, but that's not really fixable at this ...

Hey Poem! ^_^ Sorry for the wait-- school is taking way more time than I had expected. -_- Homework = slow death. I'm just going to go over some key ...

Hey Abigail, Evi here. ^^ Night owl's right-- it's a cool idea that would have a lot of morals and emotion behind it, it you delve a bit deeper into ...

Hey Shina, no worries about inactivity. ^^ I haven't been on much because of insane loads of homework, and everyone starting school understands. Now, I actually didn't like this poem. ...

Hey Rose, here as requested. ^_^ "I am. As Is Helena." said I. "We're twins." 'Is' shouldn't be capitalized. Tonight, the supper party escalated from its usual three - Father, ...

Sorry for the delay! ^_^ When YWS went kaput, I was worried I wouldn't be able to compelte your request. xD He hadn’t tried to kiss me since my mom ...

Hey Lilicia! ^_^ I'm Evi, nice to meet you. So, I loved this. :lol: Really, it was extremely well-written and the characterization was great. You pulled off this murderer/helper almost ...

Here as requested! ^_^ Glad to see some competition in Tiff's contest, hehe. :P I would hate to be the only entry. So, I'm actually not crazy about the beginning. ...

Hey Hypknowsis, Evi here. ^_^ This was a nice little read. I don't really think you need to make this any longer, really-- you have enough story to work with, ...

Okay! I'm here! Finally! Ahhhh. First of all-- grats on the purplification! ^^ I haven't seen your reviews, but you're a great writer, so I'm sure they're very helpful. Secondly-- ...

Hey Abigail! I'll just make some quick suggestions, for such a short piece. ^_^ First of all, this was extremely well written! I'd like to congratulate you on that before ...