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Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1
Ahh, I probably meant "she", haha
Jul 6, 2018 -
Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1
Do you know which sentences were worded awkwardly? It's sometimes difficult for me to spot those problematic sections, haha. Thank you so much for your review!
Jul 6, 2018 -
Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1
oops I said thank you twice whoops
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1
Thank you so much for this review! Yeah, when editing, I'll definitely make sure to mention the signing earlier rather than later. I'm so used to italics text that it ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1
Thank you so much for the review! And yeah, haha, I should have been clearer. Cora is non-verbal, so she can hear but not speak. And... hmm, yeah, I'll definitely ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 4]
yep, the ending was very rushed. IIi'll definitely rework it. I responded a bit in Discord and I'll probs chat there a bit more, but thank you so much for ...
Jun 3, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 3]
I could honestly read your reviews for days and days, Hatt. They always bring a smile to my face despite the fact they reveal that my PROOFREADING SKILLS ARE PISS ...
Jun 1, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 1]
Ahah! Initially, I was trying to write in third person omniscient for the first part, but then I ended up switching to Maddock's perspective for ease of writing. The end ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 2]
Heyo, Hatt! Thank you so much for the review! I'm making little edits to the stuff that you've pointed out. I think this should be %u201Chis formal black pants%u201D, rather ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 2]
Thank you for the review! I edited the things you pointed out and hopefully they'll read more smoothly. While it does end nicely, there are some plot threads I need ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 1]
Oh, whoops! I didn't respond to this review. Yep, Flower Boy is completely literal. You're the second (or third?) person to compare this to The Odd Life of Timothy Green, ...
May 25, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 1]
Oh! Luca was dragging out his words, thus the three o's! And a popcorn ceiling looks like this!
May 22, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 1]
Thank you so much for this review! (And the promotion!) It was incredibly helpful. I made those little edits and tried to reword some sections. And I know I say ...
May 20, 2018 -
Re: Whims of Mortality - Part I
!!!
May 17, 2018 -
Re: The Alchemist's Bookshop [Part 3]
Ahh, yeah, my characters were definitely out of character. I'll probably try to... make these scene go smoother when I rewrite it. But yeah, seriously, thanks for this review. These ...
May 17, 2018