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Heyo, Raye! I'm back here with another review. Ahhh, I loved this chapter so much. I loved the interaction between Jupiter and Ramsay, especially with the bits of the past ...

Heyo, Raye! I'm back here for another review. I really do love the notes at the start, the background it gives into Jupiter's life and upbringing. I really love the ...

Heyo, FantasyWriter! I saw your blog post, so I thought that I'd stop in for a review! Friendly note, however: if you're searching for reviews, then head on over to ...

Heyo, Raye! Sorry that I'm a few days late on review, but better late than never! I really hope that this review helps. I don't necessarily know if there's something ...

Heyo, kman! I'm here for a quick Review Day review! This will need heavy editing before it's ever submitted to any sort of agent or publisher. The first 250 words ...

Heyo, Hatt! I'm here for a quick Review Day review! While I do pick a lot on your flow, I mainly do it because you're very good at it, so ...

Heyo, Beyond! After I finish writing this review, then I'll be all caught up! Let's get started. That's a pretty big paragraph to start off the chapter with--like, wow, a ...

Heyo, Beyond! Sorry that I'm ten days late, haha. Let's jump right into the review! I'd recommend cutting down on your uses of "then" and "just". These tend to be ...

Heyo, Raye! I'm back with another review! She downed it in a sip and Downing something, to me, implies drinking all of it, whereas sipping something implies taking a small ...

Heyo, Beyond! I'm here for another chapter! Let's dive right into it. We somehow made my parents believe he is my cousin, and then,  How'd they manage to do that? ...

Heyo, I'm back with a quick review before D&D! . She leaned back in the soft leather seat and watched the shadows tick across the ground and the sun across ...

Heyo, Reine! I have a few hours to kill, so I'm here with a review! Now, let's get started :P Preface: I feel as if a lot of my criticism ...

Heyo! Thank you for tagging me in this! I'll definitely try to follow this in the future. I woke up to the sound of a ringing bell. I saw my ...

Hey, Storm! I will admit, I haven't read any previous chapters of yours, so I apologize in advance if I get anything wrong. Perhaps the weather was kind year round ...

Hey, kman! Happy Review Day! Because of the length, I'll be reviewing this as I go along. Let's get started! Gabrielle placed two quarters in. Then hit a button at ...