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Re: Story told in Colors
I have a certain connection with the colours, or so I believe. I can see this whole story with a different perspective Firstly, hey there. I love the idea or ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Arrival of monsoon
I am a bad reviewer. I don't like meddling with other person's stuff. I just like giving them thumbs up, unless they don't ask me, it feels as if I ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re:
Hello. Well well well I myself tried the dark writing but then I scared myself off Firstly, It was excellent you did not end it on dream, that really pisses ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: A chaotic scene
I love stuff that is short and beautiful. It was a cool and well read. Although I stress on scene descriptions but whatever suits the writer matters most. Add some ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Once Upon a December
I don't know but it reminds me of Stopping by The Woods on a Snowy Evening, by the very great Robert Frost. I am not suggesting anything though, Pardonne Nice ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: This Lurking Beast
Wow. Just to start I am a prose writer and I am very serious when it comes to essence, structure, matter and composition I am not going to dissect your ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Career
I don't get reviewing over here. I mean, sometimes it is preposterous to go on and read someone's stuff and twist it and cut it and well how can we ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Why You, As You Say, Lost Everything
Ok this was a free verse, right? Nice one I'd say I just want to add that the structure must be kept in mind. Either go from short to long ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Small Ponds
Although new in here I am very well known as a prose writer amongst lot of societies and blogs so I think it will not seem outwards if I review ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Unearth, intro
Finally FINALLY Finally someone who's work I can relate to and review in the truest of its sense I hope you don't mind Wind. Has always had a great effect ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Little red cross
It was not death, for I stood up, And all the dead lie down. It was not night, for all the bells Put out their tongues for noon. It was ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: The night I died (did I really die?)
Really really nice. That flower part. Simply wow. Just.. don't mind me saying. Stick to the topic and uh.. repetition loses the true essence of the words or dialogues. "You ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: looking in a mirror with a reflection not quite the same.
You can shed tears that she is gone, or you can smile because she has lived. You can close your eyes and pray that she’ll come back, or you can ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Cry
I just have this to say.. I am not promoting my stuff or what People around here.. we all.. potentially are cowards. We are born and bred this way... Or ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: A teenage thing
I can only say.. As Frost says I left you in the morning, And in the morning glow, You walked a way beside me To make me sad to go. ...
Aug 21, 2011
