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Re: Shapeless Silence
OK, wow, yeah. This made me feel... something. It kind of brought back memories I didn't remember I had. BUT in the writing sense that is a good thing, you ...
Jan 10, 2021 -
Re: Bye
I AM ALARMED YOU ARE BEING WAY TOO HARD ON YOURSELF :3 In all honesty its a great poem and full of your emotion. I can tell it came from ...
Jan 6, 2021 -
Re: Paradise Part 1 [REVISED]
I enjoyed this a lot. The way you are switching perspectives is neat and I have not seen that anywhere else yet, as far as I can remember at least. ...
Jan 6, 2021 -
Re: Game Of Thrones Season 8 (Selected Rantings From My Notebook Written Immediately After Watching)
I do not know ANYTHING about Game of Thrones or it's lore other than "winter is coming." But this gave me a few chuckles without that knowledge. Having each one ...
Jan 6, 2021 -
Re: Lamplight Chapter 1-5
This kept me going pretty good lol. I enjoyed the plot and understood it well as it was well explained. Of course there are some grammar things but overall it ...
Jan 6, 2021 -
Re: She died every second she breathed
Wow. I truly enjoyed this. I am no poet so as a reader I was going to read a bit and then stop but I just couldn't stop reading. This ...
Jan 6, 2021 -
Re: a poem about hope and giving it to others
Whilst I am sending this as a review. I can't really find anything to improve at my stage of writing. As a reader however, I have never felt like this ...
Jan 5, 2021 -
Re: To Stormwind
This is a great poem, it felt like it came from within you and it was real. This is very relatable to the world today and MANY people have probably ...
Jan 5, 2021 -
Re: A Second Chance - Prologue
This. Looks. Cool. I like the logs, it is a way of story telling I have not seen much of as of yet and the way you have told the ...
Jan 5, 2021 -
Re: Book Break-Downs: "Doctor Sleep", "Sycamore Row", "Goldfinger"...
First and foremost, this was good. It genuinely made me want to read a few books, but also watch out for some. Your writing has a lot of opinion and ...
Jan 5, 2021 -
Re: She is Mine
This is my first review! I like this. I read it smoothly and understood and related to it. Your word choice is very good. I'm not much of a poet ...
Jan 5, 2021
