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Thanks WD for reading and commenting, I so appreciate it :D I changed the margin think, but I’m still contemplating on the first sentence. *Grumbles* As to description: This was ...

Lilith: Thanks for taking your time and reading this - if you ever have anything that needs a crit, feel free to PM me. Darklight: The same :D And thanks ...

Oh. Sorry, didn't realize. Can I delete the thread or something?

Oooh, read this last year, I think. I remember that it was awesome, and that I was sorry that it ended so fast - its very, very short, lol. Hehe, ...

Okay, so my previous crits were of the nitpicky/grammar/typos kind of ones. I suppose they don’t do much to the writer, but I love them nevertheless. Character and/or plot opinion ...

Well okay, so I couldn’t keep away… *Sticks out tongue* Quote: She shivered at the freezing dew stinging her face and unconsciously pulled a cloth that didn’t smell familiar around ...

First of all, I would like to thank you all very much for the critiques - I really appreciate it! And yes, this is by its self. It doesn’t have ...

Okay, so I’m finally here xD Sorry it took me so long, but I was a little short wit time lately. Currently sick, so theoretically I have time. Quote: Brenna ...

Thanks for the crit, it was a lot of help, really xD You pointed out some really obvious mistakes. Heh, but that's just me, lol. Anyways, thank you so much ...

Thank you for reading, dragnet. You're new? Welcome to the site, lol. Myth: The same, thanks for reading, I really appreciate it. You're a miracle... -elein

No... That was how I meant it to be, I think. But thank you, thank you, thank you for taking your time and reading this. -elein

Thank you guys so much for criiquing and your time, I really, really appreciate it. Darklight: As to the phantom, that was (a bit) explained in part one. Cat is ...

I added it to the top

Read it ^_^ Or its translation, anyways. I admit, at some parts I got pretty bored and skipped a few pages, lol.

As always, I thank, thank, thank you for your time :) Yeah, I know that there was not much going on and it's botehring me a bit, lol. I guess ...