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Reuben, Ello! How are you on this very cloudy day? I trust that well C: To you review, though: Quote: What?” Will asked fast. Quickly. Quote: But not even a ...

Kool, Hello! How are you on this cloudy day? Hopefully well (: Quote: There’s no real love in the world, and with the decline of love came the decline of ...

Lozzen, Hello! How are you? I trust that well. Quote: Words whispered through dry pink lips, telling a story, painting a story, showing a story, to the many imaginary people ...

Antara, Hello! How’s it that no one has critiqued this yet, hmm? Quote: I lay in bed now thinking of them. Awkward phrasing. Quote: I go through my day and ...

Olivia, Hello. How are you? Hopefully well (: Anyway, to your review. Quote: Her hair is the colour of Autumn. Capitalizing this struck me as a bit odd. See, if ...

Cris, Hello! Welcome to YWS! Before I start on your review, though, I want to say something. See, I noticed your review count is 0. That’s not good, because the ...

Queen, Hello! Welcome to YWS - hopefully you’ll come to love this site ^^ First thing first, though - there’s a rule as far as posting stories is concerned. To ...

Littleford, Hello - welcome to YWS! This is a wonderfully addicting site (: However, there is a rule around here that says you can only post your own stuff once ...

Ahley, Hello! How’ve you been? Good, hopefully. Anyway, here’s the review: Quote: Of Nicandro’s disobedience and how she says it will bring doom to him if he doesn’t calm his ...

jasmine, Hello; I hope your well. I do like these little intros, and I write them even if I don’t have anything to say - I just like to see ...

Gracee, Hello. Welcome to YWS - I hope you’ll love it here, and not get too addicted (: Anyway, onward with your critique, yes? What caught my eye immediately, and ...

Charcoal, Hello! How are you? I trust that fine (: Anyway, I’ll be your critiquer for now, and as usual with my reviews, first you’ll get a line-by-line one (if ...

Dianis97, Hello, hope you’re well! Onward with your crit, then. Quote: On Monday, James and I got ready to go to school, tough I didn’t want to because I hadn’t ...

Pshhxhoney, Hey, welcome to the site! I hope you’ll love it here, even if I do have to warn you that it’s very addicting. Scarily so, even. Before I start ...

Fellow, Hello! How are you? I hope that well^^ Anyway, you’re critique - here it goes. Quote: The dreadful pain stopped and he heard nothing but the whistling of his ...