ErinYount

Hey Hannah, This was certainly a very helpful review. Even I feel like the first stanza is stronger than the rest of it, and I felt the lack of connectivity ...

Hey Sherri, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for stopping by, and for the amazing words. :)

Hey Pinkie, Thank you so much for all the amazing words. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Hi. Well for starters, it feels good to have you review my work, coz I read yours a lot. I'll answer to what you said, line by line. 'Hi%u2026 Reader, ...

Thank you.

Thank you. I'll be sure to keep posting. You can find more in the story called 'The Evening I Didn't See Coming'.

Hey, Thank you, for the review, first of all. Semicolan- noted. Park- yes it is the name of the park. comma- typo The appreciation feels good. Thanks again. Erin

Thank you!!

That makes more sense now. Thanks for the explanation.

Heyl Nothing much except that you should probably read your stuff a couple of times before posting it. There are many typos and spelling errors, that seem like unintentional. Keep ...

Yeah maybe. I'll juggle with the words a little first. Thanks.

Hi. First, thanks for stopping by, and for the appreciation. i am a female, but i used "he" because it just seemed more appropriate. I could have very well replaced ...

Hey hi. First, thanks for stopping by. second, the lines you mentioned mean that the writer wants some self-confidence, to reveal (make naked), or say, unmask, his thoughts to the ...

If you do, please do ping me about it. I would love to read it.