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Re: I'll Love You Forever
Hi there! The moment I started reading, I thought "Ugh, this is so cliched," then I got to "Those magical moments we shared, shattered", and thought "Well now it's cliched ...
Jun 22, 2012 -
Re: Beauty and the Beast
You said this was a retelling of Beauty and the Beast? I liked how it was written because it read well, but I thought it wasn't original enough, though I ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Memories of youth
Dude, I wish I could write like that. I liked it, it was kind of profound to me. I can't really explain it, but I enjoyed reading it quite a ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Breathe
I really liked this, but like the previous comments, I believe you should have elaborate on "The Change". Overall, I thought that it was nice, since you didn't start off ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Ode to Mother
Hmm. I think this poem has potential to be fantastic, considering its topic, but the way it was written didn't do it for me. I liked the subject and the ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Genesis
Wow, that is a really nice poem! I liked the majestic, yet oddly mysterious vibe it gave me. I adored your use of adjectives, I could literally picture "A rosy, ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: In Captivity
I like this poem, it was quite disturbing, haunting, even. After I read your little spoiler about how some of it was forced, I agreed immensely. Some parts felt like ...
Sep 28, 2011
