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Epicdonkalous

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I'll Love You Forever

    Hi there! The moment I started reading, I thought "Ugh, this is so cliched," then I got to "Those magical moments we shared, shattered", and thought "Well now it's cliched ...

    Jun 22, 2012
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Beauty and the Beast

    You said this was a retelling of Beauty and the Beast? I liked how it was written because it read well, but I thought it wasn't original enough, though I ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Memories of youth

    Dude, I wish I could write like that. I liked it, it was kind of profound to me. I can't really explain it, but I enjoyed reading it quite a ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Breathe

    I really liked this, but like the previous comments, I believe you should have elaborate on "The Change". Overall, I thought that it was nice, since you didn't start off ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ode to Mother

    Hmm. I think this poem has potential to be fantastic, considering its topic, but the way it was written didn't do it for me. I liked the subject and the ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Genesis

    Wow, that is a really nice poem! I liked the majestic, yet oddly mysterious vibe it gave me. I adored your use of adjectives, I could literally picture "A rosy, ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In Captivity

    I like this poem, it was quite disturbing, haunting, even. After I read your little spoiler about how some of it was forced, I agreed immensely. Some parts felt like ...

    Sep 28, 2011


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