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Awesome man! Glad you liked it. I've decided to take on a new turn anyway. I still might write some soft type kinds of songs, but mostly heavy metal. I ...

Thanks for that constructive criticism and your thoughts on the poem. I also used what you said and I've redone the poem over. Thanks again :)

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I corrected it, thanks again for bringing that to my attention.

Hmm.. thanks, I think I will actually use that title. Yeah, I have a different style with songs sometimes. I sing it while I'm typing/writing it down. =) Thanks again!