Eniarrol

*Sorry it was repeated*

Hey guys I got third place in the contest! Yay!

Hello! So, I like you introducing Malfoy into this plot too. I mean, after all he is connected to Voldermort. I don't realy have much to say in this review. ...

Okay, this is not helping at all Lava said I pictures Diamea as a girl too.

This real cute, it WOULD make a good play but is this the first part? Is their a next part? Good Job! Usually I don't read scripts but this is ...

Yep, I realized that just after I posted the review and started the the fourth part :D

Aww really guys? Thanks. My confidence was kinda stamped on after it didn't make into this newspaper thing.

Hahahaha love love love love love it :) Brilliant!!

SweetMoments here to review! The flow was nice and the imagery was quite nice at the beginning but then I felt that it became less near the end. I quite ...

Thanks for the reveiws guys, I'm too lazy to correct it right now but I will do it later. xoxoxox Thank you!

Thats really good! Really meaningful in a way. Good job! *likes*

I think you mean "sweet" not "sweat" dreams and also when creating a chapter or part of a story you have to somehow end it not just say "The End" ...

I know this like isn't even a reveiw but i think you should check out the "Once upon a time..." series it does twists on fairy tales to make them ...

Haha thanks cupcake

This was brilliant! I demand you to write more this could become a really interesting novel :)