Eniarrol

Wow, this is good! The pace is good. I like how you made us reader read between the lines to see that it is the Mirror of Erised instead of ...

Hi! I like how descriptive your story is. Describing your school in the third paragraph was great! It made the setting feel more realistic and not just a place you ...

Hi I'm Eniarrol! Thanks for entering my contest! Most of the spelling and grammar was corrected before I read this. Which is fine because I'm not too good on those ...

Hello I'm Eniarrol! Thanks for entering my contest. I love your take on the Mirror of Erised. Many people would take the Mirror of Erised as a magical, mysterious thing. ...

Hello I'm Eniarrol. A big thank you for entering my contest!! For a while there a thought I wouldn't have enough people. I like how at the start you lowered ...

Hi I'm Eniarrol. Thanks for entering my contest. Now, because I have literally no points I will be going around reviewing people pieces so that it is possible for me ...

Hello I'm Eniarrol! Your reviewer today! I loved the imagery in this poem like: He’s her prince, With his disarming smile and pretty words. He holds her on the dance ...

Hi I'm SweetMoments and I'll be your reviewer today! Wow! I thought that was amazing! Especially from the random select theme you got given! I was just a little confused ...

Hello I'm SweetMoments and I'm here to review! It might just be me but seemed more a story than a poem. But, being a poem you should still capitalize your ...

Nothing really wrong with this poem, actually, I really liked it! I like the kind of repetitive question throughout it and the sort of imagery you get with not many ...

Hello I don't think this needs a review so I shall comment :) I'm SweetMoments and I am here to comment. I think the goals were interesting and it would ...

Hi I'm SweetMoments and I'm here to review! I really like this idea: kinda red-queen like right? I like how you describe but I think you could flesh it out ...

Hi I'm SweetMoments and I'll be your reviewer for today. Wow, simply wow. This is amazing! The emotion is perfect and it really made me tear up as I read ...

Hey I'm SweetMoments and I'll be your reviewer today! I really loved the imagery in this piece and the raw emotion as well! I know exactly how you feel and ...

Hi, I'm SweetMoments and I'll be your reviewer today ! Although the idea of this is a little cliched I think you brought it off well with your characters being ...