Ending-Karma

Maybe it's just because fantasy fiction isn't my cup of tea, but I didn't really get into this. It was mildly enjoyable, but that's stretching it a tad for me. ...

Unlike Lilyy and Squallz, I actually enjoyed the history lesson at the beginning. I'm also fascinated with history, so that might be why; however, I feel like this did serve ...

For what is there I really don't think I can add too much to what the person above me did. However, I'd just like to say that I totally agree ...

I'd say, for starters, you REALLY need to get a flowing structure. If this were a free verse poem it'd be fine; however, in a song that will be performed ...

I'd say the best suggestion is to sit down with a guitar and/or piano and try to work this out. As they've already said above me, I think that some ...