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//sweats YAOI WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT

Oh, I'm touched! (///-A-///) Really, I'm easily won over- you just made my dad (or technically night)! I'll be sure to read some of your stuff after catching up with ...

I'll keep the chapter thing in mind for when I rewrite this thing. I've always been a dubious on the splitting thing, but you make a good point. Also, yes, ...

Heh, it's fine. I'm more behind than you are. Right, the new Star Wars movie came out. I never really got into that franchise (Pokemon took over my childhood), but ...

I am absolutely terrible with proofreading and it doesn't help that I'm pretty weak-willed, so I usually don't end up pushing myself to reread things either. Agch, I'll work on ...

Yoohoo, here for a reply. Reading your review, I might develop this narrator further- he was created for a tournament piece and I never expected to make him anything more, ...

Thanks for this review :D I usually don't write first person, since I find it really hard to express a personality that way without making myself cringe, and it's good ...

Now that you mention it, I have a perfect place to mention Arianna again next chapter. Completely unintentionally. Thanks for the reminder! XD

Thank you! :D I've been told to vary my sentence lengths before- I'll definitely work on that.

............. I never said anything ;u;

Yes! Lately, I've been concerned about my characterization and plot a little more than the writing techniques itself, and it's great to have some critiques on that. I plan to ...

Why, thank you! :D I'm glad to see that you like it. I'll try to incorporate the stuff you said into my next chapter.

Alright! Thanks again, Buggy. Your review always help me out.

Oh boy... Then I can feel terrible about not being caught up with yours.

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