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Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 11
//sweats YAOI WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 22): Not Quite There
Oh, I'm touched! (///-A-///) Really, I'm easily won over- you just made my dad (or technically night)! I'll be sure to read some of your stuff after catching up with ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 19): Tree Climbing 010
I'll keep the chapter thing in mind for when I rewrite this thing. I've always been a dubious on the splitting thing, but you make a good point. Also, yes, ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.06)
Heh, it's fine. I'm more behind than you are. Right, the new Star Wars movie came out. I never really got into that franchise (Pokemon took over my childhood), but ...
Dec 19, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 18): Paranoia and Boredom Mix Surprisingly Well
I am absolutely terrible with proofreading and it doesn't help that I'm pretty weak-willed, so I usually don't end up pushing myself to reread things either. Agch, I'll work on ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: Loneliness on the Brink (But Still Not) of Solitude
Yoohoo, here for a reply. Reading your review, I might develop this narrator further- he was created for a tournament piece and I never expected to make him anything more, ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: Loneliness on the Brink (But Still Not) of Solitude
Thanks for this review :D I usually don't write first person, since I find it really hard to express a personality that way without making myself cringe, and it's good ...
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 17): Privacy, I See
Now that you mention it, I have a perfect place to mention Arianna again next chapter. Completely unintentionally. Thanks for the reminder! XD
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 19): Tree Climbing 010
Thank you! :D I've been told to vary my sentence lengths before- I'll definitely work on that.
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.04)
............. I never said anything ;u;
Nov 25, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 15): Hide-and-Hide
Yes! Lately, I've been concerned about my characterization and plot a little more than the writing techniques itself, and it's great to have some critiques on that. I plan to ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 16): Exploring Equals Fun
Why, thank you! :D I'm glad to see that you like it. I'll try to incorporate the stuff you said into my next chapter.
Nov 15, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 14): Winning Without a Spin
Alright! Thanks again, Buggy. Your review always help me out.
Nov 12, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.02)
Oh boy... Then I can feel terrible about not being caught up with yours.
Nov 8, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.12)
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Nov 5, 2015
I seem to have submitted it twice. Please ignore this e__e