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Hm. I'll eat it along with my last egg tart. ... sorrynotsorry

Yeah, I'll have to figure out a way to work it into the story better. Probably through conversations, since his first meeting with Arianna isn't crucial to the plot and ...

That market was mainly rumors that raised caution, so people wouldn't be disappearing off the streets... every day, anyhow. I think it's a little late to change Lucius's (in)competence, but ...

Your reviews are really helpful, you know that? Thank you xD

Your reviews are really helpful, you know that? Thank you xD

Your dad is magical.

I'll take that name-origin thing into account when rewriting. I do believe I found it on the same baby-name-chart page as Mikhail, though... mmMMMM I'm considering cutting the sword part ...

Lucius had that overcoat to begin with- it was briefly mentioned in the first chapter, so it was easy to miss. I'll make sure to fix the other stuff you ...

Why did I even decide to write about something that prioritizes survival? I need to sort out their daily needs at some point... Thanks, though xP Mm. I live in ...

Thanks for pointing that mistake out- I'll be changing it right now. I'm glad that my sentences vary, because I've gotten critiques on that before and I've been working to ...

Oh, well, that's another new thing about buses learned. The more you know. Sorry about letting Divinity's home slip my mind, but there's no public places, or school, for her ...

Hmm. I guess I didn't make it clear enough. I'll reword it sometime.

You actually searched it up? Yeah, it's just a joke for LoL. I was being dumb and hey, it made my friends and me laugh, so I kept it.

I CAN'T GET OVER THAT I USED AMUSEDLY WHAT WAS I THINKING- Thanks for pointing that part out, especially. :)

? I believe Wila explained it to him in the beginning. Ulp. More reasons why I need to spend twice the amount of time editing than writing. I'll go ahead ...