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MMMMMMMGH COMING IN I'm going to try to get this week's reviews up before school starts, since when it does I'll feel REALLY lazy. *sobs* School less than two days? ...

I like Divinity the most right now; she has the most pronounced personality :P When you read so much manga and play so many games, you just get used to ...

pokemonnnnnnnnnnz I am so convinced that Mr. Kana will turn out to be a badass and then die. Probably not, but MY SENSES (THAT HAVE BEEN HONED BY MANGA) ARE ...

I share Exceed's pain. I mean really, when I first switched from glasses to contacts, I continuously tried to push my nonexistant glasses up and realized that they weren't there. ...

Exceed appeared again! -(.u.-) At the rate he's going, I'm going to start calling him 'my baby'. What? I'mafangirl,okay Some of the choices of description are weird, like "left the ...

Woot! I like this new man. He has the potential to become my favorite character, really. Anyone who enters with a whole 'foolish human' charade is usually a funny guy, ...

I'm here! I'll leave all the nitpicks for someone else, soooooo yeah! I think I nitpicked anyways, haha. The first paragraph's really awkward. "He didn’t even hear them arrive, so ...

Another wonderful chapter! :D givemeyourwritingskills (-;A;)- I actually asked my friend to help me scan your chapter. Her comments were that the ending was a little abrupt, but otherwise it's ...

Mr. Cameron, shame on you. Stop making poor Darren uncomfortable. I really liked this chapter! The description gives me an image of what's going on at all times, and it ...

Ooooh, foreshadowing? AM I FIRST I THINK I'M FIRST Is everything a flashback? Is that why it's all italicized? I think so. I'm sorry to tell you that there are ...

I blame San Francisco and my parents for not being first! D: Anyways, I'm going to briefly agree with Buggie's name-dumping statement, because wow there are a lot of new ...

hnnnnnnnnnnnnnngh im not firsttttt Why is someone always beating me to your stories? Anyways, excellent chapter! I like how you changed terms, classes, and pretty much everything to suit the ...

I'M HERE. Alright, so another wonderful chapter! I see that you're introducing more characters; Mellie is quite amusing. I wonder if she's the only one carrying medieval, or at least ...

*chokes* I was beaten to first! D: Anyways, I'm a little surprised by the reversal of the uses of the " and the ', but hey, I guess everyone has ...

YESSSS FIRSTTTTT -shot- I personally love this chapter. It's descriptive, defines Divinity and Willow well, and introduces a mysterious leopard lady who may or may not be important. Sets everything ...