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Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.09)
Yoop-de-doodle-dee. Notes Now that I've read the previous two reviews, I'll try to avoid touching upon what they pointed out. Drake's excitement in the building doesn't really seem to build ...
Jun 18, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.08)
Nothing like sleeping late and then sleeping in late, am I right? Summer vacation has started! :"D Notes Its screen is lit up with the numbers of a caller. I ...
Jun 10, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.07)
Hello there! I'll drop this off before we go on a band trip to Anaheim for a festival
May 12, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.06)
Notes Wrapped up in a light blue scarf and giant down jacket, Mr. Pyus waves for Rick to stop, his jolly, red-nosed smile shining bright as the stubborn snow still ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.05)
Hiss. Bark. Meow. Hi? Notes The mood just feels... off, with what's happening. Everett said that the kids don't notice much, but wouldn't mass-kidnappings be the talk of the town? ...
May 2, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.04)
Hey there! Notes “Everyone’s parents operate differently,” Willow says. She pushes away Drake’s hand and looks out the window... I'm only quoting this as to not make this review drag ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.03)
Notes As the bus rolls through the parking lot and back onto the streets, Divinity decides that the shoppers won’t unknowingly divulge any more information and twists around to look ...
Apr 2, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.02)
Hi. New York is tiring. Notes A hopeful smile graces Everett’s face; he hopes to buy a house in this area someday. The repeating of 'hope' is a bit awkward. ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.01)
Let me just say that I love Mr. Pyus so much. What, I've already said it? ... Notes Mr. Talisman is more wintry than yesterday’s cold and snow and angrier ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.13)
Notes The description in this chapter disappoints me a little. You start off with a pretty paragraph, and then everything melts into dialogue. There's no avoiding explanations, especially since this ...
Mar 3, 2016 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Eight, Part Two - The End of a Very Long Exposition
I lied. I ended up going to sleep immediately after :x Notes Backtracking, he quickly filled the beaker with some, replacing it afterwards, and then heading back to the bench. ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Eight, Part One - The End of a Very Long Exposition
Thoughts/Impressions Eyyyyy I'm writing this first because things are getting exciting! This time, I'm glad to be the first here. 1. First off: Physic types, huh? Miss Le Chatelier, we're ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Nine - Not so Great Expectations
Notes ‘And keep the cartographer in mind,’ Aiden affirmed. ‘Have some pity, woman!’ There are definitions for 'woman' that do not require the subject to be human, but it usually ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Eight - Not so Great Expectations
Notes Wait... so there are eighty-nine Pokemon living in the east side of the village, but eighty-seven is the total village population? ... Something doesn't add up. This is either ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Seven - Not so Great Expectations
Notes Hm, I thought Minerva and Aiden were rivals to the point that they had to be separated in school. They're awfully casual and non-argumentative here, compared to in classes. ...
Feb 7, 2016
