EnchantressMuffin

This was a good poem. I especially liked this: Living on the hills But ruling silently. Watching his kingdom Survive beneath his hooves. Very nice bit here. I don't know ...

Somehow I remember reading this sometime last month... But wasn't there more of it? I can't remember. Maybe that was another of your poems... I don't know. Anyway, it was ...

Erm... Wow. Intense. Intense, but gorgeous. I think I understand it, and it scares me... But I like it anyway. Your imagery is excellent, and I think the way you ...

This poem is pretty good, but it does seem a bit long-winded, and I couldn't really see what you were trying to say even as I found out. It took ...

I really like this poem. It's powerful, and the imagery is fantastic. I don't know about anybody else, but the relative simplicity of your words really give me a stunning ...

This is a pretty good poem. Something about the timing (or maybe it's called the rhythm) is a little off. I think it's because you have the ends of sentences ...

Read and you'll see in your mind The image of a quiet cheerful girl Who suddenly died This is a really good poem. It flows well, and has a nice ...

Well, this was a little... interesting. The writing was all right, though sometimes I felt like it was jumping around a little without enough description. You might want to change ...

This is a really badical poem. I can completely relate to the kid... perhaps because I'm only fourteen... or perhaps because I am really similar. I, also, have not grown ...