Published May 16, 2007
This poem was written by Carisha Kelsey but has been deleted for possible publication.
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The rhythm of this poem is really good and I like how it draws the reader in. I love the final line, it's very emotional and the whole extended metaphor of the light bulb is very imaginative.
Erm... Wow. Intense.
Intense, but gorgeous.
I think I understand it, and it scares me... But I like it anyway.
Your imagery is excellent, and I think the way you italicized it finished the effect nicely.
Great job. Keep up the good work!! *trite, overused saying alert*
Muffin
:O HEY! you posted it! lol. Just so you know, I like it. It sorta lost me when I read it earlier but after I read it agian I understood it. (that was just me not paying attention :p) But I like it Rieda! Keep it up.
*Lindsay*