The rhythm of this poem is really good and I like how it draws the reader in. I love the final line, it's very emotional and the whole extended metaphor of the light bulb is very imaginative.
This poem was written by Carisha Kelsey but has been deleted for possible publication.
The rhythm of this poem is really good and I like how it draws the reader in. I love the final line, it's very emotional and the whole extended metaphor of the light bulb is very imaginative.
Erm... Wow. Intense.
Intense, but gorgeous.
I think I understand it, and it scares me... But I like it anyway.
Your imagery is excellent, and I think the way you italicized it finished the effect nicely.
Great job. Keep up the good work!! *trite, overused saying alert*
Muffin
:O HEY! you posted it! lol. Just so you know, I like it. It sorta lost me when I read it earlier but after I read it agian I understood it. (that was just me not paying attention :p) But I like it Rieda! Keep it up.
*Lindsay*
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