EnchantressMuffin

I liked this! It was well-written and understandable, and just good. Your imagery was nice, and I liked what I saw in my head. And, I agree with you on ...

I never read this, but my mom did, and she said she didn't like it, and I shouldn't read it. I read the book jacket, though, and while I didn't ...

I liked this. It was cute and quick and nice, and as I like werewolves, the title drew me in right away. I did notice that in your first stanza ...

Technically, Lini, he did use some punctuation, but still, your point is well made. :) And, this was not a bad first draft. It was a little bit angsty and ...

I like this! Your voice is strong, and your use of language really gets the point across. This is pretty scarce in the imagery department, but that doesn't mean it's ...

I like this! It's quite lyrical, and pretty to read. I wish I could play guitar better so that I could try and make up a melody for it. Just ...

Well, I saw this, and I thought, "Poor poem; all the time it's been up and only one crit. How sad..." So here I am. I liked this! I pretty ...

This was a little... hm... angsty. I'm not sure how much I liked it. Sometimes the lonesome, oh-poor-me sorts of stories get a little bit tiresome. I mean, they can ...

This wasn't exactly the most intriguing thing that one could pull up out of the jumble. The beginning was not captivating, and I had a hard time getting through it. ...

Well... this was interesting. I rather liked it. Parts of it were funny, which was good, and it was extremely nonsensical, which I also liked. I liked the ending; it ...

Contrary to Incandescence's viewpoint, I liked this. It's a good concept, and some of the lines were really nifty. I especially liked the first staza, and this line: "Here is ...

Whoa. Yes, that was my first reponse. Whoa. This was not, shall we say, how I was expecting this to end. Mind you, that's a very good thing. But I ...

This was pretty hard to understand. The beginning was okay, but then it went all weird and difficult. I'll do a point-by-point: 1. Why was Samantha gasping in relief? She ...

Well, I said I'd critique, and here I am. First off, I liked how you started the story with a newspaper article. I do think that the article, in and ...

This was pretty... uh... well... it wasn't that great. There was a lot of angsty romanciness, no character development (in this kind of setting, it's the only thing that will ...