EmoChikXoX

Thank you so much! :)

Thank you :) The changing tense thing? I do that a lot XD but thank you this really helped :)

Heya, I just wanted to say I really really REALLY love this poem :)

This is just awesome :D

Awh thanks :) xxxxxxxx

WTAF?!!! xD

Hiya! Im EmoChikXoX! :) I must say, I do like your poem. I like it a lot. I like your description that you have used, it adds a lot of ...

it made perfect sense :)

your review was most helpful, thank you. and yeah I do see what you mean by the imagery xD xoxo

thankyou :)

awh thankyou! :)

and just for future refrance, farthers day is the 16th of june, not 15th :)

its is her mate, there is constructive critisim then there is this, im sorry but unless your a best seller book writer then you should keep half of that to ...

i was just thinking about my cousin going into the army... and it poped into my head :) xxx

Thankyou, this means a lot :)