Emmzziee

I am always so jelous of people who can write like this, I could NEVER get the hang of it :) All of the emotion and complicated vocabulary rolled into ...

Oh. NOW I get this whole thing xD Harry Potter is awesome, and so is this Charlii :) I love this whole "Dear Diary" situation. SMILES :D xxx

This is just so simple, and yet it speaks so loudly and with so much emotion... I wish that I could write like this :) And I am sad for ...

This poem makes me feel so old... yet, nieve :) Like, I want everything back how things used to be. It's sweet, and reminicent :D I can picture how you ...

It's cute :D Short but sweet... I think I like it :) It kind of reminds me of that song, "The wheels on the bus go round and round, round ...

N'aaaw :) Short and sweet. I like that. The words you used where simple, and yet they spoke out. And guess what... I used to have a teddy Polar bear ...

this is really sweet, yet... very mysterious too :) It leaves a lot to the imagination and I like that. ..."Love Lilly Evans." I don't know why but that sounds ...

This poem really spoke out to me as this is something I've been really fretting about for ages.... and I guess that it's awesome that you think about this stuff ...

This is so intriguing! You've got an awesome imagination. I love all of the words you chose, it all fits together perfectly and it seems to describe me pretty well ...

I wanted to comment on this 'cos it's awesome, and 'cos you said nice things about my poem ! :) I loved the emotion in this; the use of exclamation ...

Yes! The description is just.... perfect :) So I like your poem! Don't give up :) Rhyming isn't so hard xxx

This is beautiful :) Your poem is descriptive, and still leaves loads to the imagination :) Definately write some more stuff like this!!! xxx

I love this! It kind of reminds me of a song, actually... :) I think it's very creative and different. Be proud! :) xxxx