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I made a poem called insomnia :D But can I just say that mine was like a nursery-school version compared to yours?! How do you manange to piece together such ...

This is chilling :D I just love it... It paints a picture, and still leaves so MUCH to the imagination because you don't give anything away. I love the way ...

I like this :) And I think you're right with it being something Avril Lavigne might write; however, this was a bit more emotional for her style of music, which ...

Non-fiction means that your story is true... Is your story real? Because if it is, then I really like it; it's dramatic; it's sad... And I really feel for you ...

This was really fun to read! :D The only problem was, I found it hard to grasp what the message was... What the poem was about... But the way that ...

I wish that I was as articulate as you are! This piece of descriptive writing is amazing. All of that emotional stuff about unanswered questions? The way you wrote it ...

Your title is the same as that of an Avril Lavigne song, and that's what drew me to this :) I was all set to shout at you for pretending ...

There's a song that I know called "For a Pessimist I'm pretty optimisic" and that's what drew me to your poem. And I think you're REALLY wrong, by the way! ...

This shows really, really good potential :D Like, you really put a picture in my head of this lost, helpless, broken girl... it's all really well worded and the descriptions ...

HA. :) This is good! :D It sounds like you got your inspiration back... 'cos I like this :) It made me smile. and I don't know why... :P x

This is good :D I really like this; it's so emotional... I can't really think of anything to say; as far as I can see, there's nothing to critisise either ...

This is a really good, touching, descriptive poem! :) *wipes away tear* It kind of reminds me of an Evanescence song... if you know who they are) :D Because of ...

This is... cute ;) I love the end part; totally unexpected. There's just this one part; "might I steal a crate?" That kind of sounded a little predictable; like you ...

"A brilliant orb of diamond fire." That was my favorite description. This whole poem is brilliantly descriptive and thought-through, and well-presented. I really, really like this! :D yay! xxx

“It’s happening!” she squealed gripping his arm. But it wasn’t there. “Jarred! Jarred where did you go?” On just this one part... is it supposed to say, "But he wasn't ...