You're Gone

Okay, here's the first complete song I wrote (sometimes I grab a paper and just write a verse but never complete it).

It fits in the pop-rock genre and is something Avril Lavigne might sing.

My ill-fated crush on someone inspired me to write this song, after i realized that it will never be (*sob* *sob*).

So here is the lyrics to You're Gone, and I hope you'll like it.



Verse1:

Getting through the day; Used to be okay,

(I was with you)

I thought it was chemistry; How it worked between you and me

The sparks used to flash so real; Was it us? Is it how I feel?

I made up mind, I was waiting for you



We weren't each other's half; But though you made me laugh

Your heart was somewhere else

I knew it couldn't be



Chorus:

You're gone; I walked away from you

There's nothing you could do;

We could never be; So now I'll say ,"so long"

I was lying to myself; But you're picture's still on my shelf

I guess I haven't gotten over you, baby



Verse 2:

Caught up between two sides; What's wrong and right

(But I can't choose)

Baby if you only knew; What I'd give to be with you

You reeled me; To bad you didn't feel me

Well if you'll treat me the way you treated her; Then I don't give a damn see you later



Chorus:

You're gone; I walked away from you

There's nothing you could do;

We could never be; So now I'll say ,"so long"

I was lying to myself; But you're picture's still on my shelf

I guess I haven't gotten over you



Bridge:

It couldn't go on like this

My head was spinning; You were winning

You were pinning after her

So I yanked myself outta this madness; I can breath I finally made it!



I'm gone; I ran away from home;

And now I'm all alone; I'm only a girl

And please tell me that you

Miss me as much as I do;(Do you?)

I guess there's still a little love for you

But I'm out of this mess/shit, it's true

And you're the person I wont need



Chorus:

You're gone; I walked away from you

There's nothing you could do;

We could never be; So now I'll say ,"so long"

I was lying to myself; But you're picture's still on my shelf

I guess I haven't gotten over you, baby



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So that's my song. By the way, any thing in brackets means that it's preformed by backing vocals. Yes, I even thought about the back vocals.

Anyway tell me what you think, and how much would you rate, and if you think it'll have any future.

Thanks.
Maisoon