EmmaJane

Major oops! :oops: My comment about the speechtag - scrap. What was I thinking?!!

I'd like to say that I had already made the decision to scrap this chapter and re-write completely differently. :D So, sorry that you reviewed a dead piece of work.

*startled* Why'd you delete it? ~EmmaJane~

Thank you all for your lovely (and helpful) comments! I am determined to get this finished, but it's moving slowly :( :D Thank you! Emma xx

Oh man. Just saw it was a fanfic so OBVIOUSLY something came before... I'm feeling so smart right now... :oops: ~EmmaJane~

Hey GreatEscape :D Thank you ^^ I, uh, noticed something. “Well I’m thirsty now,” he replied. She pulled her hand from his face and turned to still in his arms. ...

Hey! You're new! ^^' I totally missed that! Welcome to YWS!!!

lol at the "I need you to write" ha ha.

Right, okay. Not much i can do about eight - that's already done - but chapter nine and maybe ten will be all about Amelia. I have a wicked idea. ...

The original Prologue was something like 4, 5 A4 pages and I hadn't even finished. So I thought I'd better cut it down. :D And yeah, ^^' I often get ...

Wow. That's really put me to shame :D

Okay, it's really painful being left on such a cliffhanger. Please say you'll post the next chapter soon. :D

Due to Chapter One being too short I have decided that Chapter Two is now part of Chapter One. Sorry if it might take me a while to edit the ...

Welcome to YWS b the way!! :D

I'm actually quite scared I missed those :S lol, the number of times I've read through it checking for mistakes! But yeah, thank you!!! ^^ :D