EmmaJane

Hi there, Nike! Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll have a great time on this site, it's a fantastic place to sharpen your writing skills, with many wonderful, funny people ...

Hi Pink! Nice story! I just read it and noticed a few tiny things... “I think you’re stupid,” Laelia stated. Great opening line. That instantly made me curious. C: they ...

Hey wonderingkate! This was a nice, short and sweet piece. I just noticed a few small things. the pounding heart that lies in my chest I feel you sort of ...

Oh my gosh, Skittles! I love your user name and picture! They're both so amazing! ^^ Ahem ... yes, onto the review... I love this idea, and I can see ...

Hey KJ! :) I'm so glad you're posting more of this, because I read chapter one ... and, well, HAD to read the whole thing. Your style of writing is ...

Wow, horse, the font colour in your review is not for tired eyes, lol. Anyway, Wolves, :D, I enjoyed this little excerpt, and reading more would certainly be nice. I'm ...

Hello FF! (Can I call you that?) I'm here with the review for the next section! I though you deserved a more thorough review from me today, so I've been ...

Here as requested, Slandie! ;) I'll try not to manage my words, lol, but here are my thoughts on "Dream or Reality"! :smt023 Chat/MSN speak: Reading chat speak in a ...

I'm really confused with what is happening in your story. I mean ... what..? Everything seems everywhere, and pretty random. Maybe you should slow down a little more and explain ...

WOW, Cy! That is so suspenseful! I'm on the edge of my seat, desperately wanting to read more! Tell me there's more! In the short time that I’ve lived I ...

Forgottenfallen! Here's my review as requested! :D Wonderful start here, but a few little things jumped out at me. 1) It appears basically everyone has reported that they feel the ...

KJ, you can't ask me to review this! It's too perfect. :P If I did manage to find some tiny mistake, I'm sure it would be too minuscule to worry ...

Hi! :smt003 I've seen Fruits Basket! A couple of years ago... It was (and still is) one of my favourite animes! So it was pretty funny reading this and seeing ...

Hello iCarlyfan! Here as requested ;) How has your christmas been? Well, on with the review! :smt023 Nitpicks! Slowly, Altair approached his victim with ease. Good hook. I know nothing ...

Ha ha. I heard it was bad. Apparently it was too condescending, did you get a sense of that, too? I want to continue reading that series, but the negative ...