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Re: She killed me.
Wow, that all completely went over my head. Seriously, I am so confused right now. Let me figure this out and you tell me if I got it right or ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: The Death of Humpty Dumpty
Hey Echoes! Something interesting on Humpty Dumpty... Check out the second point. ;] My claim to fame is that I live there. Yeah, Colchester's a big place, so I'm not ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: We All Are Birds. (Chap. 1)
Hey gal. I saw this a while ago, but I've only just got the time today to review it. I have to admit, I'd only read the bottom half when ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 7
I read this chapter this morning and nearly missed the bus, haha. I couldn't tear myself away, Ranger. He’s got a way of holding himself that just doesn’t fit with ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Patience chapter 1
Hey Sarah! So, I'm here to review as you've requested. (: Beware: I might twitter on about a point until it was worn out thirty years ago. And they don't ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 6
Yay! More Dragons! I was actually going to nag you to put up the next chapter, before I saw that you had on HTBD's wall. (X Read my mind. Chance ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Ellie And The Magical Book
Sure, Holly! Your work really reminded me of my first novel that I tried to write (before I got bored, like I always do...), so that was like a trip ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Ellie And The Magical Book
Hi Holly! Welcome to YWS! I really like this: it reminds me so much of how I was with books. Getting lost in them (but not as much as your ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Circle I (ii-Finn)
Hey Stella! So, I might have read this before I figured out there was a chapter that came before... but I've just gone and read that one. Now I've caught ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Avari
Hi Stori!! I love the title of your story, it's really nice. Wow, that was short. Did you mean it to end then? It just feels a little cut off ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 5
Haha, I love it. Really, no huge critique for you, sorry. ): This was just so good. ...I really wish you'd give me something to say. I feel so useless! ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: The Dragon's Game
Hi Ashley and Yanelis! Welcome to YWS! (: Wow, I love the title of this piece. It really drew me to your story, so congrats to whoever thought of that. ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 4
Hi RH! Thanks for the PM and sorry I'm so late to this. Okay, I have to say I have a problem with the way the dragon's powers were introduced. ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Shards [Chapter 1]
Suussssiiiiieee! I'm here at last. (: Righto! The first thing that hits me right in the face is your beginning. We're straight into the action, which is good for my ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 3
Yessss! More Dragons! (: You must never stop writing this, you do realise this, right? ;P Mwahahaha, I have a nit-pick or two... This is a joke, right? " Oh ...
Jan 30, 2011
