EmmaGrayce

Covered faces: can't tell who is who. This is a good starting line Impossible expressions you can not read. Nice idea but needs to flow a bit more, i would ...

Hey this was a really good piece, i liked the flow of it and the vocabulary you used! The only part that I didn't like was "Specters amid the river’s ...

Hi there! "You lied to my face looked deep in my eyes told me you loved me filled me with lies. You smothered my light (comma?) Dosed me in gas ...

This is definately a poem filled with a lot of deep emotion. Of course there are things we can improve and many bits that are already very fantastic. There are ...

Slow and steady The rain falls Eyes of pane glass ( Do you mean for these last two lines to rhyme and not the first ones? Interesting idea) Drops glide ...

whoa. I think you have talent and a lot of potential as a writer. The dialogue was really good and i was able to visualize everything in my head! Great ...

It's full of a lot of intense emotion which makes it really interesting to read. It's really deep and makes you be able to create visuals. I think it's amazing. ...