Emma

Nice, though thats what I dont think 67%! Oh well, each one of us has different views!

Sorry Harley, I laugh at everything.... Please forgive me.

Hey nice story! Where are all the other nice comments?! Out of 10.... 9 1/2. I would love it to see more!

Yes, I did let Harley finish it off for me. and see? One mistake: sty should be stay. Unless its a new word.... But please tell her to write more!!! ...

Hey thanks alot, then this must be my best piece yet! There is another one which I did first. Its called 'Rachel: Shaking' Though this one is better because I ...

Thank you, when I try to make my next poem which be like soon, someday... I will remember to take those into considaration.

No, your work is good, by the way you MUST send in your art work. Cos Im still waiting.

Hey thanx.

hmmm, I always do alot of typos. I did spot the 'I' alot too. Its like the first version of her life in the mental hospital. The next one is ...

I like it, it may have been different. But different in a good way!

Nice poem. It was touchy, but nice in the same way.

And?!?!? And what?!?! I need more! Not just 'and'!! Yew must finish it. I love the languge in it, 'Are you fucking nuts?!' So poetic and poliet... :P

Nice poem. I liked it, of course I would. I dont think there is any crit apart from. When writing a poem, each line must start with a Capital letter. ...

Wow, this is like... amazing. Seriously, I was expecting critz. I thought I couldn't do poems... Oh well. THANXS.

Where's the rest?! We need more!!! We need more!!!