Emma

Have you ever thought about doing that? Like cross that busy road and just thinking what could happen ifyou walked right onto the road and get hit? o.O.o

:P I told you it was crap :P

That is really good! Awwww poor guy! :(

wow! this is really good, but yeah.. read through your work before publishing it.

Youre welcome :P

It sound more of a small story piece than a poem.. Mostly because its not in stanzas. Sorry, it just makes it more look like a poem.. (shuts up)

wow i really liked this! Though i found it hard to read, though my age kinda lets me down on this story.. You must of worked really hard and this ...

Harley! You know what english class you are going to be in! The top! :D

awww Harlz don't be sad. It's really good! And you know it is better than what I can ever write. Just a little too short! :D

essays can be stories too.. And it really doesn't belong in the non-fiction area because it isn't non-fiction.

Wow that was very detailed, and if only it wasnt done in properly I know it would be excellent. :)

Wow this is very good. As Im not very good at poems I am unable to give you any critz. Though it is really good! Go you!

hurry with it!

oh, i forgot to say thats the first bit >.< :P

I know if you could hear her say it, she would be laughing, shut it. Sorry i didnt make that more clearer. :P The Ryan bit, I was trying to ...