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Re: Short piece of angsty stuff- Revenge.
Its good, but I would of loved to know what happened before and why it happened.
Jul 5, 2005 -
Re: for harley
That is really good. I know Harley will like it. :)
Jun 28, 2005 -
Re: Teenage OutBursts Of Cliche Fun
copyrighted? :l
Jun 24, 2005 -
Re: Flat Cliche
:shock: Its good!! Damn you.. I wish you could sing it for me!!
May 26, 2005 -
Re: Maybe
Erm.. I actullay thought it was good! :D Better than what I can do anyway...
May 24, 2005 -
Re: Broken up inside
Its good! I hate it when I see lyrics and I cant here the bloody song... >.< Sorry for the languge! :P
May 24, 2005 -
Re: The Lights part 2
lmao! that is funny :P
May 13, 2005 -
Re: The Lights
wow! its good, though some problems.. bawahaha Im mean.. O.o Floor should be ground, it sounds better. O.o And.. WHY WAS LAURA'S NAME IN IT AND NOT MINE?! O.o Apart ...
May 12, 2005 -
Re: Shave your legs
O.o Ha Ha TBR! :P You have hairy legs! O.o
May 10, 2005 -
Re: the burning sensation of sunlight
wow that is amazing, you decribed it so well, I could never do a poem like that! You're only going to get praised!!
May 8, 2005 -
Re: Heroes of the Elven Lands:Chapter two
wow! It is very good, though I didnt quite get the last bit! Very good description of the fire! Its amazing! Go you!! \:D/
May 8, 2005 -
Re: Smoke and dust 14
They kissed?! And she pulled away?! Its really good! Im sorry I cant say anymore! :(
May 8, 2005 -
Re: Smoke and dust 13 (edited)
It sounds better, and the story! I'm going to read the next bit now! Wow! And I really am sorry for not commenting before. I was really busy! I'm soo ...
May 8, 2005 -
Re: Wind Whisper
Yeah its good, though mind the spelling mistakes
May 4, 2005 -
Re: Eulogy of A Dreamer: Sorry Boys!
lol! its good! I hope there is more!
Apr 28, 2005