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Re: En Route to Portland: Departing 1:45 AM
I don't have much to say about this poem because I loved it. I had to read it a second time to full grasp what was happening - and that ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Becky
Hello there! I'm here to present you with the most wonderful review. :) Well, not exactly the most wonderful of all, but a good one none the less! It's hard ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: New Story
Hey there! So I have to say that at first I was very surprised by this piece. I thought I'd skim it, maybe, possibly review it, but didn't really expect ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Dear Love:
Hey there! I really like the idea you have for this poem - talking to cupid, asking him why he shot you with the arrow... So, you've really got an ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: The Birth of Magic [COMPLETELY Rewritten]
I should probably preface this review with the fact that I don't like it, and that's not your fault at all. That's my fault. I like poems, generally speak, about ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re:
Hello Tinkerfee! I am here to review your novel. I must first say, though, that I only read Chapter One. You might consider splitting up their chapters on their own? ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: When the Sky Was Blue
Hey there! I really love the unique and different environment you created here. That really gave a good spark to this short story, and left me curious to see where ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Let me go
Oooh, Darling! I love the meaning behind this poem. It's so easily relate-able and you have some great lines sticking here and there! The delicate rose, With the edge of ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Like A Mirror
Hey there! So, I'm here to hopefully give you a review that is more to your liking - although it probably won't be filled with compliment worshiping ness. This poem ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Cutter
Hey there! So, I'm here to review the poem. :) Hope I'm not too rough on it. First off I'd like to point out your inaccurate use of semicolons, so ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: the five senses of sight
I can't say I liked this poem because I didn't understand it in full but I can say you have a good use of imagery. My first question - since ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: The City Below: Chapter One
Hey there! I agree with the others when they say you need to make it longer than it is, but instead of just focusing on that I'm gunna help you ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: A last dance in darkness
Hey there! finally got around to this. ;-) You've already got a lot of reviews so hopefully I Can say something useful. So, I'm a big fan of avant guarde ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: In the [Insert Appropriate Sensory Organ] of the Beholder- 1
Hey hey! Alright, so I like the idea thus far. A research study into how blind men judge beauty? Veeery interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Untold Past
Hey there Baby! I can see you've got a bit of a rhyme scheme going: AABACC? It's not very standard, though. Also, your last three lines are very long in ...
May 28, 2010
