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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: En Route to Portland: Departing 1:45 AM

    I don't have much to say about this poem because I loved it. I had to read it a second time to full grasp what was happening - and that ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Becky

    Hello there! I'm here to present you with the most wonderful review. :) Well, not exactly the most wonderful of all, but a good one none the less! It's hard ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: New Story

    Hey there! So I have to say that at first I was very surprised by this piece. I thought I'd skim it, maybe, possibly review it, but didn't really expect ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dear Love:

    Hey there! I really like the idea you have for this poem - talking to cupid, asking him why he shot you with the arrow... So, you've really got an ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Birth of Magic [COMPLETELY Rewritten]

    I should probably preface this review with the fact that I don't like it, and that's not your fault at all. That's my fault. I like poems, generally speak, about ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re:

    Hello Tinkerfee! I am here to review your novel. I must first say, though, that I only read Chapter One. You might consider splitting up their chapters on their own? ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: When the Sky Was Blue

    Hey there! I really love the unique and different environment you created here. That really gave a good spark to this short story, and left me curious to see where ...

    Jun 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Let me go

    Oooh, Darling! I love the meaning behind this poem. It's so easily relate-able and you have some great lines sticking here and there! The delicate rose, With the edge of ...

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Like A Mirror

    Hey there! So, I'm here to hopefully give you a review that is more to your liking - although it probably won't be filled with compliment worshiping ness. This poem ...

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cutter

    Hey there! So, I'm here to review the poem. :) Hope I'm not too rough on it. First off I'd like to point out your inaccurate use of semicolons, so ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the five senses of sight

    I can't say I liked this poem because I didn't understand it in full but I can say you have a good use of imagery. My first question - since ...

    Jun 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The City Below: Chapter One

    Hey there! I agree with the others when they say you need to make it longer than it is, but instead of just focusing on that I'm gunna help you ...

    Jun 2, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A last dance in darkness

    Hey there! finally got around to this. ;-) You've already got a lot of reviews so hopefully I Can say something useful. So, I'm a big fan of avant guarde ...

    Jun 2, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In the [Insert Appropriate Sensory Organ] of the Beholder- 1

    Hey hey! Alright, so I like the idea thus far. A research study into how blind men judge beauty? Veeery interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. ...

    May 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Untold Past

    Hey there Baby! I can see you've got a bit of a rhyme scheme going: AABACC? It's not very standard, though. Also, your last three lines are very long in ...

    May 28, 2010


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