Emerson

This isn't a bad poem, but I'll go over some spots where I think things could be changed for the better. It started off as nothing. That innocent glance across ...

It was a morbid day Millie thought. With an opaque, slate sky overhead filled with darker glints of cloud. The second sentence isn't much of a sentence, considering it contains ...

Well, sorry love, but I am not going to be so kind as those above and just give you a cutesie reply to a cutesie poem. ^_^ You understand. So ...

II. une tâche de montagne I had to look up tâche! I do not know that word yet, although, now I do. It brings an interesting light to the poem, ...

Cal, you know how much I love your poetry. I think the reason it took me so long to get here is because I can never think of anything to ...

People ages f- rom now The word "ages" threw me off. Maybe if you said years? I like it, but I think I would like it more if it said ...

I'm not entirely sure I get it, so perhaps this is one of those real deep poems where the surface must be severely scratched to find the meaning. I'm going ...

I'm wondering how you didn't find Alice in Wonderland ? Haha, well, it's by Lewis Carroll, which might help you. I need to read that. Edit: Try looking for Alice's ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS. If you have any questions or need help with something, feel free to contact me! I have several things to say that either do or ...

Ahhhh haaaa ayeeee ayeee yayiee haaahaa Cut this, and all the other sounds out. Even though they would be sung in your version of it, the lyrics should only be ...

It's interesting. I'm not entirely sure how much I like it because of my own personal views on things, you know? But objectively, it is very creative. Like everyone else, ...

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Every kiss on the cheek is like knifes cutting my flesh. Honestly, this is the best line in the whole poem. I hate to say it, but this is the ...

"All you need to know if you haven't that Karim ends up dying." Blunt, much? :P THE FOREIGNER OK, so I do love Karim to itty bitty small pieces of ...

Hello there Super Kill Robot! Your beginning is interesting, but it truly rubs me the wrong way. For one thing, you just go into dialogue. Now, I have the terrible ...