Emerson

Hey there! There are many things in this world that go unnoticed. There are many people who seem to only seek further knowledge on the things they are familiar with, ...

Well, I can only second Cade. This is just an entry in a diary, honestly. You can call it poetic prose, and your cw teacher may love it, but it's ...

Well! I don't really know what to say. Usually when people have creative writing assignments so strict as the one you've been given there is no way on earth the ...

Hey there! First of all welcome to YWS. If you have any questions or need help with something feel free to PM me. I edited the title of your post ...

Your title is curious. Pax de Luc? What language is that? "La Pax" is barbarians in French, but then that makes no sense? haha. I sit in the dark, in ...

I'm actually here! Seconds teased her like bubbling brimstone. I'm not entirely sure I like this metaphor. The glow painted shadows across the concrete walls of the basement [s]who[/s] which[?] ...

I don't normally read lyrics, but heck, if you're going to crawl around the site and post things than I, by default, most read them and throw giant pieces of ...

Your punctuation in some places is incredebly sporatic or weird. For example: Fakes they were, for in your time of need they turned their backs upon you, Now, alone and ...

Perhaps a critique of this will allow you to forgive me for not critiquing your short story yet. ^^, I will find the time soon, I am trying! Patience drips ...

Like Hunter said, caps in the titles are annoying and painful to one's eyes. I changed it for you to lower case. If you have an artistic reason for the ...

For Tillychan, and her sandwich. .... XD You're horrible. Don't let your mommy find out you used such a bad word. who had blonde hair and freckles a nasty habit ...

Jack! I love you for writing. The dark clouds had appeared two days ago, brooding and angry, casting the sea in gloom. Aren't storms always brooding and angry? Only today ...

but in the strange way his life usually turned out, what was worst was exactly what happened. I think I understand this--I'm not sure. But it is strange, and you ...

It was her sixteenth birth day the day she placed I think you see my problem. Please reword. She kissed his cheek as she ought and laid on her side ...

it is good that the couple live away from the outskirts of Boston This is weird. If you say they live away from the outskirts of Boston, I think you ...