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Re: Paper and Ink
"A great poem that is telling about your life that is perfect for people that like this kind of poetry. Creepy in someways but very good, Many readers will love ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: Dreams
Ok, Emerald here for a review. First off I would like to say that you probably didn't take much time in this, It's pretty much just a word repeating over ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Flesh and Bone
Man, this poem is short but pretty awesome! Oh, by the way, i'm here for a review! :D I like how you describe us! The mask part is pretty cool, ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]
This is a good story! What I like about this is it can actually be USED to make a story, like a first timer making a story! I thought this ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: Eyes of Hooks
No nitpicks with this one! Great job! *Bro fist* Favorite lines: My eyes are knives. I slash and stab at my insides, and yours. What we see ruins our lives. ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: Why I'm called anonymous
Wooo! this is cool! No nitpicks here! Favorite Lines: I am not noticed, I am not heard, I am not a fool Nor a nerd. I write poems, But they're ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: Blink.
Hello! EmeraldLinks here for a review! I haz no nitpicks about dis story wah am I talking like dis? ... *Awkward silence* So, I would just like to say that ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: Basket of Fruit
Hello! Emerald here for a review! I really like this poem and I have nitpicks about it! Great job! *Thumbs up* Favorite Lines "Ignorance and apathy are twins sitting in ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: Isn't it beautiful? (spoken)
Emerald here for a review! Let me just start out with saying when I read this last night and fell asleep, I dreamed I was flying! I don't see anything ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: A Short Ode to Here
Hello Emerald here for a review! Man, this is one good poem, Only one correction from me! On the fourth paragraph you should put a comma instead of a period ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Stars
Emerald here for a review! Maaaannnn this poem is soooo goood! I have nothing to correct but just to say the "but" in the fourth part but just omg this ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: A Pool of Tears
Emerald here for an- *Sniff* review... First of all... Let me say... This story is really dark and creepy! I like story's like this except some give me nightmares D: ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: A Love Like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
HI! EmeraldLinks here for a review! I just want to say I just LOVE the story of dr.Jekyll and Mr. Hyde! This Halloween I had to dress up as Mr. ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 3: Your Desire To Deny
Phoebe, such a lovely name! I really love this story! keep up the good work and also I really like how yo put lots of work into this story. Her ...
Mar 22, 2014 -
Re: "Smile, darling, smile."
Hi this is emeraldlinks here to review First off I completely agree with megustapastel " Hi, I actually love this. I can definitely relate to this in a personal level, ...
Mar 22, 2014
