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Re: I'm Wearing Your T-Shirt
Awwww. This was a very sad work, but also, incredibly well written. The whole t-shirt motif was just... simply beautiful actually. Because it's so honest. I really hope this wasn't ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: Donut Adventure
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL And this is why I love a good funny work! Hee hee I knew I wanted to read this when I first saw the title because it would be ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: To Be Destroyed
Hiyo hunny! Another miserable work. XD If I were to be destroyed, Let my ashes be scattered around And nature recycle in a manner profound. So the person is saying ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: Expectations
Hi. So this another one of those inspirational speeches. I like these. This paragraph is about change. Life gives you a chance to change the way you've lived I can't ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: The Wayfaring: By Sillia Brown (revised)
Hi. I was really confused when reading this. You have loads of poems at the beginning but it didn't look like you wrote them all? Unless you made all those ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: Dear Complacent Authority Figures
Heyo So you've written another work. personally, I don't think this was as good as the last one. It's another ranty work, where the unnamed character just goes on and ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 5: Breakdown Motel
Hi. At first I had trouble understanding this because as you pointed out in the comment below there was some confusion with tenses. Also, the constant change up between italics ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Life After Wartime
Hi honey. Hmmm. This was depressing. I know what you based it on. At the same time, it was like... ;( Anyways, review: What Went Well 1. You have used ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: ​Fathers of Power Chapter 5: Mana and Swords
Hi. So you've got a regular follower here. I am struggling to find new things to say that I have mentioned previously in the other chapters. XD Here is what ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: My Place or Yours? [Part 2]
Hi. I can see why you said this was between a novel and a short story because it is. It has the lead on potential to be a novel chapter, ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: When the little kids get spaceships (Edited)
Hi So when you said this was going to be a poem in two parts, I thought you meant you were going to post part 1 now and part 2 ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 4
Hi. So this is the follow on from "Lydia" which I quite enjoyed reading. :) Now I know the bits in italics are memory and the POV changes in this ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Magic- Chapter 1
Hi. I really like the fact you opened with a quote. It set the scene. It's always good to let the reader have a little inside knowledge on your inspiration ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Raindrops Leave Scattered Shadows
Heyo I had a very emotive response to your title, it made me quite upset. XD However, I ventured to read this sad sounding work and I was pleasantly surprised. ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Ordinary Days and Extraordinary Nights, Installment One
Hi. So I noticed right from the off this work was going to be an acquired taste because of the language and the way it was written and the length ...
Jul 9, 2014