EmeraldEyes

Ok. So there seems to be a thing about Americans and Independence. They go hand in hand. XD I liked the fact that I agreed with the opening line, but ...

Heddo. So firstly, I can see why someone requested this to be posted. :) Those cuts on her wrist? The ones that lay like scarlet warning signs? It's an allegory. ...

Hello! So this was a nice piece of poetry. I noticed the way you spelled the title was interesting. :D It was drew me in in fact and made the ...

Hey. I have to say I agree with the comment below. I was surprise by how quickly this jumped from the prologue into the first chapters. In some ways I ...

Hey.. I love the fact that the title of this work is a contradiction. XD It started off with a really "round" tone, what I mean by this it that ...

Hi! So the title of this piece caught my eye. Then when I started reading I realised that the tone of this work was actually really bitter. :/ It was ...

Hey. So I enjoyed reading this work. What Went Well. 1. The ideas were well organised and structured. 2. There was a solid theme throughout the work and it continued ...

Hi. So this is a short and arty piece of work. You've made a lot of interesting sounds with this work. It has a very fluid sound to it, if ...

Hi. So the first thing that struck me about this work, was that it's an interesting (and very difficult) topic to write about unless you've actually been there and experienced ...

Hi. So this was really experimental. To start with (and judging by the title) I thought the work was going to be a bit bossy! XD But it didn't go ...

Hi. The first thing I can comment on about this work was how long it was XD The second is that I wasn't really sure whether or not this was ...

Hi. It's interesting to try and review this on literary merit, because you've written your own work but it's about someone else's work. It's also interesting that you have decided ...

I've got to be honest... this was kinda a bad idea. It's easy to laugh about it (o.o) as long as the events discussed don't effect you, but for the ...

Hello. So this is a lovely little work. The shortness is nice and it makes it interesting because there is more to think about than there is to read. "Laugh ...

Heggo hunny! I owe you a review for this fabulous new work. :D It's become very popular already and I can see why. The sun shined through the blinds; an ...