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Re: Chthonic Mantra
I concur! The simplicity here is a nod to your skill; anything more complex, or longer, might have ended up muddy. Lovely, Bjorn. ^_^
Feb 6, 2008 -
Re: Hurt
I think Suz just about hit my suggestions right on the head--it's not a bad poem, it's just a little generic, a little bland. I think if you polished it ...
Feb 6, 2008 -
Re: Freedom
The daughters of Zeus may be too fickle to love or trust. Truly beautiful, and--best of all--only one of the stunning lines found herein. Morrow said it best, I think. ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: Unlikely Messiah - a poem about Drunkism
:lol: This is so old--yet still funny, Jacko Smacko. Bravo?
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: Shiver down my Spine
I'd say Via's covered about all of it; I like it, but I think it could benefit from a good shot of punctuation. It does sound an awful lot like ...
Feb 3, 2008